In this novella, bad boy, Dane MacKenzie, is coming home to Surrender, Montana. It’s been ten years since he left the woman he loved behind to make a name for himself, and now he’s bound and determined to claim her once and for all.But Charlotte Munroe has no desire to welcome home the Prodigal Son with a fatted calf. The bitterness of Dane’s betrayal runs deep, and she has no plans of letting him back into her life. Especially since she’s trying to protect the son Dane isn’t aware exists from heartbreak, since she’s sure he’s only going to walk out of their lives again.Other Erotic Titles by Liliana HartThomasRileyCooperThe Madam DuchessDouble JeopardyWho's Riding Red?Paradise Disguised
This Contemporary give to us some advantages, like this :
1. No plot. Just sex. Spoiler alert!
The description of this "book" talks about a woman who was left heartbroken, alone and pregnant. She will never forgive the man
Who left her this way. Five minutes after a chance encounter they are having steamy sex in a garage!
No plot or character development. Penthouse Forum is far more believable. Oh, the book cover does deserve 5 stars!
2. Potential is there, but too short to deliver
I picked this very short ebook up free, so didn't have much expectations. I thought the writing was good, and I would read more by this author. My only beef is this story moved at such a fast pace! It had potential, including (what could be) a great cast of characters for a series, but over all it was too short to care about the characters. So much was left unsaid and unaddressed. BUT, since this appears to be a teaser for a series, we may get those answers in later books.
Need more appointment... ?
Waste of time and a horrible story .......spoiler alert
The author wants us to believe that a woman who has raised her son alone for 9 years, because Dad left town. Who has the smarts to run her own business, and run her father's farm, is dumb enough to falls right back in Dane's arms within minutes. It reads like maybe 5 minutes had passed before she is not only having sex with Dane but unprotected sex at that! Please...no women with any self-respect would do that. All Dane needs to do is bang her a few times says he is sorry and that is that?! What a crock! Don't waste your time on this book.
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